TOK Essay Tutoring
& Revision

Need help with an outline? Or want to fine-tune your TOK essay draft? Send me your essay and I'll help you where you are. And we'll get to where you want to be!

TOK Essay help from outline to draft to submission.

You send me your essay. I go in and mark it up: notes, comments, and specific suggestions right where they matter. You'll see exactly where your argument is landing, where it's losing marks, and what to do about it.

I've done this for over 1,700 students. Most send one draft and walk away knowing precisely what to fix. Some come back for every round, right up to submission. Either way — the writing stays yours.

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TOK Essay Feedback, notes, and an accurate predicted grade!

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ysy2007

May 2026 | Singapore

Amazing buy, exceeded expectation, highly recommend to anyone, feedback is very comprehensive and there is a lot of attention and care to details. Would definitely buy again, the service as a whole is very worth it and there are no regrets

clausiusclpyron

May 2025 | New Zealand

I’d like to thank Mr. Jones for taking the time to read through my TOK essay. His feedback on structure and relevance was really helpful. I recommend this service to anyone who’s unsure about their direction or looking to improve their work!

You need help and I'm here with you every step of the way. When you send me your paper, here's what I'll do:

Inline markup — I go inside your document and leave notes, comments, and suggestions directly where they matter.

General feedback — substantial broader observations about your argument, knowledge question, and structure that I noticed while reading.

Predicted grade & rubric breakdown — the score an IB examiner would most likely give you, and why.

Follow-up chat — once you get your feedback, you can message me with questions. I don't disappear after delivery.

Note: Written Feedback Only = no inline markup. You get the feedback document, predicted grade, and follow-up chat — just not notes inside your essay itself.

No. I don't write for you, or produce anything you submit as your own work. That's cheating and I won't do it.

What I do is read your TOK essay or exhibition and tell you what's working, what isn't, and what an examiner would think. That's the same thing your teacher does when they review a draft. The IB explicitly allows students to get feedback on drafts — it's encouraged.

Who actually reads my essay?
Me. Patrick. Not a contractor or nameless person behind a paywall (unlike Classtify and Revision Village), not AI, not someone who's never been in IB. I've been inside the IB system for over a decade including time as an examiner.

What happens to my essay after?
Nothing. It stays between us.

Why do I charge so much? Fair question. Here's the honest answer.

A lot of TOK essay feedback services online — including big platforms like Clastify and Revision Village — use unverified college students or anonymous contractors to review your child's work. Examiners don't actually grade your work! There's no way to know who's actually reading the essay, what their qualifications are, or whether they've ever been inside an IB classroom.

I spent eleven years as an IB educator and examiner. When your child sends me their essay, I'm the one who reads it. You're paying for a person with a specific, verifiable track record. Also, I'm not using any AI!

Is it worth it?
The TOK essay is worth up to 3 points on the IB diploma — points that can be the difference between getting into a university or not. Professional, qualified feedback on a high-stakes academic document is worth more than $5. I'm not the cheapest option — I'm the one that works.

Simple: You place your order and you will immediately be emailed a form for sending your document to me (and no one else!).

That's it. No back-and-forth needed before we start — just order and send. Your delivery time includes weekends, holidays, and the times when I'm on an international flight to Singapore. As soon as you check out, the clock starts.

When you get your essay back, we can chat for clarification as much as you need! I'm here to help!

TOK Essay Tutoring & Revision

TOK Essay Tutoring
& Revision